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  1. OryxTheCrake

                Two Down

               

                CHARACTERS

                            Mayumi

                            Isamu

                            Hiroshi

                            Susumu

     

                SCENE: February 1945, 179 American B-29’s
    armed with napalm and incendiary weapons punish the Japanese. One quarter of
    Tokyo is burning. The smoke is thick; burnt rubber and wood fills the air.
    Bodies fill the streets. Day in and out, the sounds of screams and moans – pain
    and anguish – pride and perseverance; the remaining people of Tokyo flood the
    streets, putting out fires, helping women and children, and the elderly.

    [Clack! Clack clack clack clack! Clak clak]

    Hiroshi: Mom, stop,
    I’ve got it.

    Mayumi: [takes the hammer from Hiroshi] you’re
    just like your Father. Never listen!

    Hiroshi: Don’t talk
    about him that way! I miss him!

    Mayumi: [looking straight into his intelligent, dark
    little eyes
    ] I’m afraid I’ll lose you too, like Isamu!

    Mayumi: [pointing at a jagged board on the ground]
    Pick that up Hiroshi, and nail it to the window.

    Hiroshi: [looking about for his friend] Have you
    seen….

    Mayumi: [grabbing for his shirt, but he’s too fast]
    Don’t even think about it!

    [Mayumi thinking aloud… I cannot
    lose him; he’s all I have… Tears welling up as images of Isamu flood her mind]

    Mayumi: [whispering for herself] There are others
    that need help. It could have been worse. Hiroshi will return. He just lost his
    Father. He’s coping.

    Hiroshi: Susumuuuu!
    Susumuu! Su! … SUSUMU! Want to do it again, like yesterday? Remember, I had the
    helmet first, so that means I get the sword today! Right?

    Susumu: Eh, I don’t
    feel like playing that today. Besides, I didn’t bring the sword or the helmet –
    we’ll have to play samurai some other day.

    Hiroshi: [disappointed, shoulders slump, head tilted
    down. Shooting his eyes through his long black hair
    ] Fine…

    Susumu: I’ve got it;
    let’s go to the top of Mount Jinba! If we set out now, we’ll be there by
    nightfall.

    Hiroshi:
    No way! My mother will kill me!                                   

    Susumu: Nah, I’m 16
    years old. I’m practically your older brother. I…

    Hiroshi: [cutting him off] First of all, you’re only
    14 and you have a bad leg. Do you really think you can make it?

    Susumu: After the
    orphanage burnt down, all my records went with it – I can be any age I want! [Sticks his tongue out at Hirsohi]

                [Hiroshi kicks
    Susumu’s bad leg and tackles him to the ground]

    Hiroshi: You could be Genghis
    Kahn for all I care, I’ll take you down. [A
    little smirk forms at the corner of his mouth
    ]

    Susumu: [getting up, dusting himself off] Nice
    new boots! They’re shiny like your Fathers. Good tread, and strong shoe laces.
    Come on! Are you ready to go? Let’s test out your new combat boots!

                [Hiroshi and Susumu
    collect some things, and head out for Mt. Jinba]

     Mayumi: [whispering for herself] It’s a miracle…
    a miracle…

                [Sweat dropping
    from her smooth nose, and hitting the dusty floor. Walking onto the deck of her
    house, and heading inside; insulated, and comforted by her belongings in the
    house
    , she smiles at a picture of
    Isamu on the wall]

    Mayumi: It’s… It’s as
    if nothing has happened. I must keep the household together; you’re a disgrace
    to the family. [Muttering to herself]
    Tisk!

                [Cracks of light
    shown through the boarded up windows, rays catching dust on its way in,
    illuminating it against the dark room; the sun is setting on japan
    ]

    Susumu: [waving to Hiroshi] Come on, I’ve got a
    bum leg, and I’m still beating you.

    Hiroshi: You may have a
    bum leg, but they’re longer than mine; you take big steps.

    Susumu: Come on, the
    sun is setting, don’t you want to see Tokyo from on high?

    Hiroshi: Almost…

                [Preparing rice
    balls, and potatoes; Mayumi tends to kitchen duties
    ]

    Mayumi: Just a little
    more. Hum, hmm, hmm… [Humming as she
    cooks
    ] Hiroshi should return at any time. He’ll be so excited to see his
    father.

                [Dumping carefully
    measured cups of dirt and rocks into her wok
    ]

    Mayumi: Just a tad
    more… Hmm, hmm.

                [Adding grass
    clippings from outside
    ]

    Hiroshi: Wow… look
    what’s happened. All I see is fog and little fire flies.

    Susumu: That would be
    smoke from fires. Not fog and fire flies.

                [A faint humming
    sound in the distance. Rising gradually, like a bow is being dragged against a
    deep bass string; from an imperceptible note, to an obvious hum
    ]

    Hiroshi: You hear that
    Susumu?

    Susumu: Yeah, it sounds
    like many planes. It’s too dark now; I can’t see a thing…

                [In the distance
    over Tokyo, planes drop flares into the pattern of an X
    ]

    Hiroshi: Oh no,
    something is going on.

    Susumu: It’s spotter
    planes. They’re marking targets. They did this last time!

                [The humming sound
    stops Mayumi in her tracks. She drops the bowl she was holding. It tumbles, and
    smashes on the floor]

    Mayumi: [Suddenly, like a shock from a defibrillator;
    Mayumi is back in reality]
    Where’s Hiroshi? He never returned!

    Mayumi: [Running out of the house, and into darkness]
    HIROSHI!!! HIROSHI!! COME BACK!! [Kneeling
    in the middle of the dusty street, sobbing
    ] Hiroshi… I cannot lose Hiroshi…

                [Charging down the
    mountain like a billy goat. One foot in front of the other, making leaps and
    skids, Hiroshi makes his way down the mountain
    ]

    Hiroshi: [Yelling aloud] I’ve got to warn my
    Mother, they’re coming!

                [The deep humming
    transforms into a thundering roar. Rising and falling with every passing
    bomber. Lights up ahead, and all around, illuminating the smoke; the scene is
    like fire and lightening]

    Mayumi: [In the middle of the street, alone, kneeling
    and holding herself, sobbing. Lights from the bombs touching her face, exposing
    the dust and grit on her skin. Once a young woman, now haggard by war]
    Hiroshi!

    Hiroshi: Mom! Is that
    you?

                [Approaching with
    speed, nearly tackling the dark mass in the middle of the road]

    Mayumi: Oh, my love! [Holding each other, crying]

    Hiroshi: We must get
    out of here!

                [The temperature is
    rising. Sweat dripping from both of them, they hold each other tightly. Bombs
    igniting objects left and right of the road, Hiroshi attempts to pick up his
    mother]

    Mayumi: [Rising to her feet, legs shaking] Come
    on, hold my hand, we mustn’t wait!

                [Heading straight down the road, desperately
    seeking escape, Mayumi grabs her only son and runs as fast as she can]

    [BOOM, Clack, clack… screech!!!]

    END SCENE: Susumu makes his way off
    the mountain, in search of his friend. Hours go by. Without standing landmarks,
    places are hard to find. Charred remains, smoke, and smoldering bodies littered
    about; no sign of Hiroshi. Just as he was about to give up, something shiny
    catches his eye. Pushing over an adult body, Susumu discovers a small human
    frame. Charred, blackened, unrecognizable – wearing shiny black boots…

    Susumu: HIROSHI!!!

                On the nights of
    March 9-10, 1945, 339 B-29 bombers dropped over 1,500 tons of bombs on Tokyo,
    Japan. Roughly 100,000 people lost their lives, and millions homeless; making
    this event more deadly than Desden, Hiroshima or Nagasaki as single events.

     

     

     

     

     

               

     

     


  2. OryxTheCrake

                Two Down

               

                CHARACTERS

                            Mayumi

                            Isamu

                            Hiroshi

                            Susumu

     

                SCENE: February 1945, 179 American B-29’s
    armed with napalm and incendiary weapons punish the Japanese. One quarter of
    Tokyo is burning. The smoke is thick; burnt rubber and wood fills the air.
    Bodies fill the streets. Day in and out, the sounds of screams and moans – pain
    and anguish – pride and perseverance; the remaining people of Tokyo flood the
    streets, putting out fires, helping women and children, and the elderly.

    [Clack! Clack clack clack clack! Clak clak]

    Hiroshi: Mom, stop,
    I’ve got it.

    Mayumi: [takes the hammer from Hiroshi] you’re
    just like your Father. Never listen!

    Hiroshi: Don’t talk
    about him that way! I miss him!

    Mayumi: [looking straight into his intelligent, dark
    little eyes
    ] I’m afraid I’ll lose you too, like Isamu!

    Mayumi: [pointing at a jagged board on the ground]
    Pick that up Hiroshi, and nail it to the window.

    Hiroshi: [looking about for his friend] Have you
    seen….

    Mayumi: [grabbing for his shirt, but he’s too fast]
    Don’t even think about it!

    [Mayumi thinking aloud… I cannot
    lose him; he’s all I have… Tears welling up as images of Isamu flood her mind]

    Mayumi: [whispering for herself] There are others
    that need help. It could have been worse. Hiroshi will return. He just lost his
    Father. He’s coping.

    Hiroshi: Susumuuuu!
    Susumuu! Su! … SUSUMU! Want to do it again, like yesterday? Remember, I had the
    helmet first, so that means I get the sword today! Right?

    Susumu: Eh, I don’t
    feel like playing that today. Besides, I didn’t bring the sword or the helmet –
    we’ll have to play samurai some other day.

    Hiroshi: [disappointed, shoulders slump, head tilted
    down. Shooting his eyes through his long black hair
    ] Fine…

    Susumu: I’ve got it;
    let’s go to the top of Mount Jinba! If we set out now, we’ll be there by
    nightfall.

    Hiroshi:
    No way! My mother will kill me!                                   

    Susumu: Nah, I’m 16
    years old. I’m practically your older brother. I…

    Hiroshi: [cutting him off] First of all, you’re only
    14 and you have a bad leg. Do you really think you can make it?

    Susumu: After the
    orphanage burnt down, all my records went with it – I can be any age I want! [Sticks his tongue out at Hirsohi]

                [Hiroshi kicks
    Susumu’s bad leg and tackles him to the ground]

    Hiroshi: You could be Genghis
    Kahn for all I care, I’ll take you down. [A
    little smirk forms at the corner of his mouth
    ]

    Susumu: [getting up, dusting himself off] Nice
    new boots! They’re shiny like your Fathers. Good tread, and strong shoe laces.
    Come on! Are you ready to go? Let’s test out your new combat boots!

                [Hiroshi and Susumu
    collect some things, and head out for Mt. Jinba]

     

    Mayumi: [whispering for herself] It’s a miracle…
    a miracle…

                [Sweat dropping
    from her smooth nose, and hitting the dusty floor. Walking onto the deck of her
    house, and heading inside; insulated, and comforted by her belongings in the
    house
    , she smiles at a picture of
    Isamu on the wall]

    Mayumi: It’s… It’s as
    if nothing has happened. I must keep the household together; you’re a disgrace
    to the family. [Muttering to herself]
    Tisk!

                [Cracks of light
    shown through the boarded up windows, rays catching dust on its way in,
    illuminating it against the dark room; the sun is setting on japan
    ]

    Susumu: [waving to Hiroshi] Come on, I’ve got a
    bum leg, and I’m still beating you.

    Hiroshi: You may have a
    bum leg, but they’re longer than mine; you take big steps.

    Susumu: Come on, the
    sun is setting, don’t you want to see Tokyo from on high?

    Hiroshi: Almost…

                [Preparing rice
    balls, and potatoes; Mayumi tends to kitchen duties
    ]

    Mayumi: Just a little
    more. Hum, hmm, hmm… [Humming as she
    cooks
    ] Hiroshi should return at any time. He’ll be so excited to see his
    father.

                [Dumping carefully
    measured cups of dirt and rocks into her wok
    ]

    Mayumi: Just a tad
    more… Hmm, hmm.

                [Adding grass
    clippings from outside
    ]

    Hiroshi: Wow… look
    what’s happened. All I see is fog and little fire flies.

    Susumu: That would be
    smoke from fires. Not fog and fire flies.

                [A faint humming
    sound in the distance. Rising gradually, like a bow is being dragged against a
    deep bass string; from an imperceptible note, to an obvious hum
    ]

    Hiroshi: You hear that
    Susumu?

    Susumu: Yeah, it sounds
    like many planes. It’s too dark now; I can’t see a thing…

                [In the distance
    over Tokyo, planes drop flares into the pattern of an X
    ]

    Hiroshi: Oh no,
    something is going on.

    Susumu: It’s spotter
    planes. They’re marking targets. They did this last time!

                [The humming sound
    stops Mayumi in her tracks. She drops the bowl she was holding. It tumbles, and
    smashes on the floor]

    Mayumi: [Suddenly, like a shock from a defibrillator;
    Mayumi is back in reality]
    Where’s Hiroshi? He never returned!

    Mayumi: [Running out of the house, and into darkness]
    HIROSHI!!! HIROSHI!! COME BACK!! [Kneeling
    in the middle of the dusty street, sobbing
    ] Hiroshi… I cannot lose Hiroshi…

                [Charging down the
    mountain like a billy goat. One foot in front of the other, making leaps and
    skids, Hiroshi makes his way down the mountain
    ]

    Hiroshi: [Yelling aloud] I’ve got to warn my
    Mother, they’re coming!

                [The deep humming
    transforms into a thundering roar. Rising and falling with every passing
    bomber. Lights up ahead, and all around, illuminating the smoke; the scene is
    like fire and lightening]

    Mayumi: [In the middle of the street, alone, kneeling
    and holding herself, sobbing. Lights from the bombs touching her face, exposing
    the dust and grit on her skin. Once a young woman, now haggard by war]
    Hiroshi!

    Hiroshi: Mom! Is that
    you?

                [Approaching with
    speed, nearly tackling the dark mass in the middle of the road]

    Mayumi: Oh, my love! [Holding each other, crying]

    Hiroshi: We must get
    out of here!

                [The temperature is
    rising. Sweat dripping from both of them, they hold each other tightly. Bombs
    igniting objects left and right of the road, Hiroshi attempts to pick up his
    mother]

    Mayumi: [Rising to her feet, legs shaking] Come
    on, hold my hand, we mustn’t wait!

                [Heading straight down the road, desperately
    seeking escape, Mayumi grabs her only son and runs as fast as she can]

    [BOOM, Clack, clack… screech!!!]

    END SCENE: Susumu makes his way off
    the mountain, in search of his friend. Hours go by. Without standing landmarks,
    places are hard to find. Charred remains, smoke, and smoldering bodies littered
    about; no sign of Hiroshi. Just as he was about to give up, something shiny
    catches his eye. Pushing over an adult body, Susumu discovers a small human
    frame. Charred, blackened, unrecognizable – wearing shiny black boots…

    Susumu: HIROSHI!!!

                On the nights of
    March 9-10, 1945, 339 B-29 bombers dropped over 1,500 tons of bombs on Tokyo,
    Japan. Roughly 100,000 people lost their lives, and millions homeless; making
    this event more deadly than Desden, Hiroshima or Nagasaki as single events.

     

     

     

     

     

               

     

     

  3. I wrote a short story, inspired much in part by freedomain radio, that I thought I'd share. 

    Enjoy... Hopefully [:D]

     


    Heavy
    Armor

                A long, long time ago…

                The sun was high, casting shadows as long as an old man’s
    beard. The day was getting old, too. Many different shapes and sizes, some
    small, some large, green stems with little leaves, catching rays of light and
    tossing it in all directions; the large ones had purple rims with orange centers,
    while the smaller ones were yellow, my father called them weeds. He would yank
    them from my hand, or squirt them when living on the lawn. Left for dead, they
    withered up, and the wind blew them away.

                When my Father came home, he had a signature sound. I
    could always feel the car in my chest; reflecting on it, I’m not sure if it was
    loud, or if I was anticipating some grave evil. When his car thudded over the
    curb, slammed to a stop in front of the house, the car door would swing open,
    creaking all the way, followed by the sound of empty cans beating the ground;
    he was drunk, again.

                “I told you Mace Cowart” – heavy on the cowart, making it
    sound like coward – “I told I aint rais’n no sissy boy FAG!” his red face would
    spew; speckles of beer tainted spit would slap my 12 year old brow. “If you gonna
    play with flowers, you can join home ec and become a girl.” Although he never
    struck me, his words tore my soul to shreds. From that point on, I decided to
    protect myself.

                …”Ha, ha… watch this” I said. Forcing the wadded up -
    soaked in spit piece of paper into the straw, THUD! “Ha, ha!”… Weasel Jimmy as
    I called him, grasped the back of his head with his narrow hand, fragile bones
    and tendons reflecting whatever light was in the dimly lit room, turned around
    and shot me a wincing look. “Mr. Cowart! Out of my class this instant!” Mrs.
    Franken, my science teacher yelped. The red, well-worn public school door
    slammed behind me, practically losing more paint with every closure. My armor
    is becoming thick…

                …”Yes, that’s what I have selected. Sure, yes. I like its
    culture. Thank you!” I worked my tail off to attend that college. My mother
    always said I’d become something, and I had to impress my father. We’d share
    stories about where I’d take them after I made my millions; how fun. This was
    the same year I meet my wife, Maude. She, like I, was a business major. I fell
    in love when I turned around to watch the closing door slam shut before her,
    “ha, ha, thought you’d sneak in.” I said. Her face pierced the glass, nearly
    burnt it down, gave me a look I hadn’t seen in years; absolute power…

                …The same year my son Kindle was born, was the same year
    my father died. It was a terrible year. Had I known he’d grow to be a sissy, I’d
    of doubled down even more…

                …”Mace, you need to cut him some slack. He’s just a
    little boy; didn’t you enjoy painting when you were young?” Maude, with her
    open face, and stupid expression beamed up at me. “If he wants to be a sissy
    boy, he can join the girl scouts!” my scotch drenched breathe, pounded back.
    “Little Kindle is gonna go to college, and become a stock broker like his old
    man. He aint no flower collecting, painting, home making sissy boy!”…

                …On Kindle’s 17th birthday, Maude and I got
    into it. She shouldn’t have pushed me, she knew better than to make me that
    mad; if she’d just shut up about Kindle, it wouldn’t have happened…

                …My armor was thick by now, many layers added every year;
    as people pushed, and I punched back; I added another layer. Since Maude fell
    down the stairs, I hadn’t seen my son in over 40 years; when she died, Kindle
    didn’t say a single word. He picked up and left. Last I heard, he’d become some
    sissy painter out in New York. Very successful, supposedly. Had a family, kids
    of his own…

                One’s perspective changes, I suppose, when the volume is
    turned down, the day to day grind halted, hovering over one’s self, like a
    dream. Starring down at an otherwise empty bed, some old man at its crooked
    center, that can’t be me. Where is my family? The room is empty, except for the
    occasional nurse who changes me, bathes me, and makes me clean. In the corner
    of the room is my baggage, and my suit-and-tie armor folded neatly, lying on an
    empty chair.

                Transparent tears falling from my fading face, starring
    down at that unrecognizably ugly man. Weathered by time, wrinkled by cigarettes
    and booze, alone because of armor; “I’m sorry…”

     

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