You don't want to talk to me. (A poem)

[huttnedu]

This is an original poem of mine, I didn't know where else to post it so I hope it's appropriate for this subforum.

I hope you enjoy, please comment with your thoughts if you have any about it.

You don't want to talk to me.

My ideas are scary and my face is quite hairy so I can see why you'd rather not heed
The words that im sayin' or prayers I am prayin, but I beg you to follow no words, only deeds.
Now I know there's no god but I come in his name to destroy all the sins of the world
For rational science and philosophy are the methods I've bought and the methods I've sold
With time and attention, meticulous care you can understand any theory you dare
And then they'll come one by one all in a row, earth-shattering epiphanies and all that you know
Will be turned upside down and your head starts to spin as the concepts you've built up collapse from within
And you realize with anxious delight in your heart that life is construction and today you will start
To question and analyze, see and explain, the theories you once took for granted
from the geographical place in which you had landed
And at first it will seem like you're out at sea, stranded
As you cast aside all that you have been handed
But then you'll remember just what was demanded
Of you as a child, all innocent, candid.

"Be honest, be true, and never talk back. Understanding? That's for the Devil.
Question your parents or government, you'll be stuck in a prison or Hell's lowest level."

What you've taken on faith is fear itself, 
But now that you're older, put fear on the shelf,
Go search your dark basements, in closets, under beds...
Textbooks, movies, newspapers you've read
Need to be reconsidered with sober mind,
But I know that you're terrified of what you might find

So I can see why you would rather not heed, but this is exactly what all humans need:
A head on their shoulders and esteem for one's soul, and a lifelong desire to keep oneself whole.[/font]

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Originally posted: http://www.integratedpost.com/2013/02/you-don-want-to-talk-to-me.html 

Thank you for reading.

[Guest NateC]

Bravo

[huttnedu]

Thank you!

[nathanm]

I tuned into a threadTo read what some secular christ man had saidQuite possibly translated from Huttese to English?But the christ man was not doing the trick with the duplicating fishInstead it was some verse about a mind journeyAnd the ramifications of the applications of philosophyIt takes much guts to post one's rhymes on the webTo shine public scrutiny on verse which one's writThough the Internet Pool Bully shall dunk all thread headers below One reply's like a life vest of closed-cell foam

[huttnedu]

A Christ man,you are and I am one too

And even dear leader, Sir Stef Molyneux

for we struggle our lives to find the right words

to change the sheeple into free birds

And I really don't mean to give disrespect

but the masses must wake up before we're all wrecked.

 

thanks for the response, Nathan

[Guest NateC]

My words are terseAs I write this verse,But I love these thoughts and form.And for those out there,I hope will careof this shelter from the storm.