I would like some feedback.

[aFireInside]

I made a new youtube channel and i would like some feed back . 

 

Its a basic how to channel . 

 

I only have one video right now. 

Im hoping to finish my series on functions by this week. 

 

 

 

http://www.youtube.com/channel/UC4J-tUe8X-Vf5aZGT9uQD7w

 

 

 

Things Im already working on, my voice and better compositions and format for the videos.. 

Im new to video editing. 

 

 

 

Thank you : ) 

 

 

It would help if you guys subscribe... Because It would rank me higher when 

people do a search... 

like and comment ... help a brother out . 

[Josh F]

Ivan, good job I guess man, assuming what you said makes sense (I couldnt say). Can I recommend you crop the video and hide the paint tools?

[aFireInside]

Thanks for taking the time to reply ... 

 

And yes I'm working on that, I cropped it last time but then youtube just put a big black bar there instead.. 

(to fill in the blank spot)

 

 

Im 99% sure on the facts. 

I spent 1 whole day fact checking with my text books .. 

[LovePrevails]

well done creating your new content

 

my advice would be do as many as consistently as you can and your quality will increase faster than if you are a complete perfectionist

 

if in a years time you have done 52 or 100 and think you can can do the earlier ones better then - boom - redo them

 

 

on a side note, here is a joke for you

 

f of x walks into a bar...

 

 

... the barman says "sorry we don't serve functions"    

 

[Wesley]

2 recommendations would be to work on a bit of an intro or outro. The video stopped a little suddenly for me. Maybe ask watchers how they can get into contact with you to leave feedback or what kind of math topics they would like to hear? I'm not sure how you want the show to be structured, but that's just an idea.

 

Also I would recommend not using super light yellow. It was very hard to see against the white. 

 

Otherwise, it was a great video. I very much second what LovePrevails said about just doing them many many times and eventually you will get a ton better. Look forward to seeing more!

[aFireInside]

Thanks guys i will take your advise seriously. 

 

It really helps. Today I'm working on writing the lesson for the next part..

 

 

And yes , "repetition is the mother of all learning" ..