rock siles barcellos Posted June 5, 2014 Share Posted June 5, 2014 Hi! I'd like to share with everyone something I'm working on This is a project in which I’ll lay out the case about how and why governments were formed in the first place and why it generates most of the problems that exists in our society today, all in comics format I'm working on the language and the narrative so any feedback is apreciated Its in the top 4 pages in my Tumblr, there's also some other stuff of mine there too if you want to check out http://rockbarcellos.tumblr.com/ I also plan to put it in my own personal website, I'd love to make partnership with anyone interested in helping in anyway Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Durden Posted June 5, 2014 Share Posted June 5, 2014 I think it's an absolutely great idea with a lot of potential. The drawings look good, only the text could use a spell check. I would also suggest you add one or two pages at the beginning to show how humans lived in tribes without governments for almost 200.000 years. Just to add some perspective and show people that there was a stable way of life long before governments ever came into the picture. If I had more time I would offer to partner up, but I don't so I can only offer my feedback at the moment. I'll be happy to comment on new pages when they come out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LovePrevails Posted June 5, 2014 Share Posted June 5, 2014 fantastic project Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rock siles barcellos Posted June 6, 2014 Author Share Posted June 6, 2014 Thanks so much, Tyler and Love! Spelling errors corrected now, thanks for pointing it out Tyler,Great suggestion. In the future I plan to cover a lot of subjects in this format and put it in my website, so I'll sure consider your suggestion, thanks again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RuralRon Posted June 27, 2014 Share Posted June 27, 2014 I completely agree, what a great project. You're obviously an extremely talented person, and it's great you found a way to channel it to further more awareness of what so many don't see and are clueless about. Bravo my friend, most excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rock siles barcellos Posted June 28, 2014 Author Share Posted June 28, 2014 Thanks, Ron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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